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Thanks for your reply Carolyn - you're right - it is an awful tragedy and it is too sad to think about - but it is reality. I have lots more poems but I just wanted to get the feel for what people th…

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Hello Everyone... I'm completely new at this whole thing. The reason why I'm here is, I write poems and I have a friend who suggested I give this a shot to get some feedback on my poems. I know poe…

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Marlene Mosher replied to Mindy Lee George's discussion 'Looking for feedback'

Great poem. I love how near the end you give hope. ' A brother and a sister, all of seven and ten Are pulled from beneath the rubble alive - hallelujah - amen" Your last two lines encourge the reader to turn something tragic into something positiv…

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Carolyn replied to Mindy Lee George's discussion 'Looking for feedback'

I think that is lovely Mindy- brings a lump to my throat! It's an awful tragedy that we can't even begin to comprehend..... it is actually just to sad to think about. C xx

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